Friday, November 23, 2012


my tentative thesis


invention of robot

robots are made by humans, to help in many ways. like machines robots can be destroy by humans. robots can not thinks by themselves, because the have to be programmed to do some things. humans has to be careful when they program robots. they can not give to the robots much power of thinking. because robots can substitute human places.

This thesis is  related with the project because I think that technologist are invented robot to make then do the work that people as human being have to do. Do not thinking in the consequences that a irresponsible action can have a negative reaction in society

my analysis in this is the human has to be carefully when they build robots because if robots can think they will want to be better that humans, and people as human can not loss the the feeling of affection

a possible opposing idea is that if robot can be help full if they are programated  just with the purpose they will use


tre potencial sources



  1. Timeline of Robots - Inventors - About.com

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    A timeline of the history of mechanical men or robots.
  2. Inventors, Inventions and Robotics

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    Broken Arrow fourth, fifth and sixth graders are going to study InventorsInventions and Robotics. This website will be used to store information---links, images, ...
  3. Robots, electronics, Robot parts, invention, circuits

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    Also provided, are links to Instructables I have done, projects, robot parts, and other information that might be of interest to electronics experimenters, inventors...

Robotics Inventions

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Robotics Inventions - Our mission is to deliver semi-autonomous and fully- autonomous robots, a generic autonomy module RI SPIRIT



Lifeguard Robot - The 50 Best Inventions of 2010 - TIME

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Friday, October 12, 2012


Daysi Nunez
Ms.Newman
FIQWS 10027 E
October 10, 2012

I read the article the way how Ms. Newman teached to the class. first I read the introduction to know
about the contest of the article. I read the passages two or more time before I understand the meaning
of the passages. after to understand the passage I wrote the main idea, at the side of the article, the
way that I understand. I underline the most important parts of the article. This active reading
help me to understand the article faster, because after read, underline, and wrote the ideas was more
ease to analyze the meaning of the article.

Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Outline and Questions

Daysi S Nunez
Ms. Newman
FIQWS 10027 E
September 24, 2012

 

ORGANIZING YUOR WRITING OUTLINE

Outline is a general plan of the material that is be presented in a speech or a paper. The outline shows the order of the various topics, relative importance of each, and the relationship between the various parts. Professional organize 

OUTLINE

I. Introductory paragraph 

A topic sentence 

1- First subtopic this is the topic on the 2nd paragraph

2- Second subtopic this is the topic of the 3rd paragraph

3- Third subtopic this is the topic of the 

II. First supporting paragraph 

Restart what subtopic one is

1- Supporting details

2-Supporting details and examples 

3- Supporting details

III Second supporting paragraph 

Restart what second subtopic is

1- Supporting details 

2- Supporting details

3- Supporting details

IV third supporting paragraph 

1- Supporting ideas

2- Supporting ideas   

3- Supporting ideas and examples

V Conclusion 

Restart main topic and subtopic
 

1 Does the outline make the criteria we discussed on the 12th ? How How not 

I think that the outline do not make criteria with what we discussed in class, because I did not follow the process 

2 would it have been more helpful to make the outline before writing the first draft or after? Why?

Yes I think if I doing with the outline my first draft would be better.

Tuesday, September 4, 2012

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